Is this a good starting paragraph for my vampire boarding school story?

"Your hair is gorgeous,my sweet!"Count Pavel exclaimed in Response to her self put downs, as he twirled and swirled his youngest child round and round the grand dining room of his rather luxurious manor.Sibella's long,lush fiery curls shined under the chandelier and she smiled,but the smile was just for him.How could she be happy when her time to leave her beloved father for boarding school was fast approaching?It was a family tradition and honor to attend Slater's Academy she knew.Still,Her elderly father was her world.